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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

#time #job #part #course #tutor #situation #action
Dear
Mr.
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 John, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I cannot continue my evening
course
 due to my hectic work schedule. Please let me explain my situation .I am working full time as
hotel
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 manager in
Indian
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an Indian
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 restaurant apparently, I finish late sometimes. That's why I often come late
in
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the
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class. I kindly, request
to
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you
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that
i
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 will not be able to complete my
course
 .I start my work
everyday
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 Monday to Friday and many
tourist
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 come and stay in the hotel holiday period time.
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,sometimes I work
on
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the weekend
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weekend
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 as well and my
part time
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course
 is in these days. which is not possible to do it. I would like to request to you to give
my
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 full refund as the
course
 just has started 2 days before. Please let me in advance when your
next
 session will start.In
future
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 I will try to complete my
course
. I want you to draw your immediate attention
on
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this
 matter.I would
be appreciate
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 for help. Looking forward
for
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 your reply .
Your
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 Sincerely, Jason Task 2 Question
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