Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.

In
serval
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Serval
several
years there is a huge increase of the private
transport
than the government
transport
. Few people believe that once each month people should
travel
by public
transport
instead
of their own
vehicle
. In
this
essay I will discuss both
procs
in favor of (an action or proposal etc.)
pros
process
pro's
and
cons how
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cons, how
it is beneficial in terms of air pollution and how difficultly it will be to manage by public
transport
. On the bright side, the advantage of not using the private
vehicle
for
single day
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a single day
will have a positive impact on environment as there will be no air pollution and a noise pollution. Due to
this
people will tend to
travel
by local
transport
, using
bicycle
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bicycles
or by walking. Now a
days
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day
, people are so depending on their own
vehicle
that even for the short distance they
travel
by
vehicle
instead
of walking, which will help them to be physically active and fit.
For instance
, people will enjoy walking freely and bicycling as there be no traffic congestion and fear of
any
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some
accident.
In addition
, by not using
four-wheel
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a four-wheel vehicle
vehicle
for a single day will
also
benefit them in terms for saving as they don’t have to invest in petrol or diesel. On the other side, the demerits of using public
transport
can lead to a difficult
situations
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situation
. People have to plan their schedule prior and manage their time according to reach at their destination, if not they can miss their important meetings or appointment.
Further
,
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
can not stop anywhere in between for the other work before the planned stop, so which is more time consuming.
In addition
, if
any case
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any, case
of medical emergency occurs, they might get delayed by
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
from
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by
public
transport
. To sum up, in my opinion the idea of car-free day once every month gives
good impact
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a good impact
on people’s health and on the environment. But, on the other side of
coin
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the coin
it is less likely to be
travel
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travelling
by local mode as
its
the thing named or in question
it
consumes more time and long
travel
.
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