The number of refugees and immigrants is increasing. What are the possible causes and effects of this? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In all our known history, we have seen multiple immigration movements, from when people
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
organized in nomads and moved from place to place, till the latest,
in
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at
the beginning of the 20th century. But, nowadays
this
trend seems to have increased and more and more individuals migrate to other countries. In
this
essay I will discuss the causes and effects of
this
.
Firstly
, there are multiple reasons for someone to migrate legally or not to another country.
Furthermore
,
This
might be a result of a lack of job spaces or a shortage of University opportunities, which might be available abroad. To illustrate, from my own experience, I moved to England when I was 18 in order to find a
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side-table
University, because medical sciences
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
not available in my state of origin.
Lastly
, another reason is the ever-increasing gap between developed and developing nations, due to the technological evolution. Regarding the effect of
this
phenomena, it has
devasting
making light of
devastating
consequences for the country of origin.
Moreover most
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Moreover, most
people that migrate come from underdeveloped countries and are the one’s that can offer to their society. But, because they leave, the work force shrinks and does not give the economy the chance to prosper.
For example
, the Greek government issued a study that was collecting data from the years 2000-2014 and showed that, one of the reasons that the country had an economic crisis was the immense amount of people leaving to go and work in other places.
Lastly
, on a positive note,
this
offers the nation the chance to spread
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its
culture in other places around the world. Taking everything into consideration, there multiple causes, and consequences of
this
situation.
Nevertheless
, Governments all around the globe should try and encourage people to stay as close to their home as possible.
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