Many people believe that increasing levels of violence on television and in films is having a direct result on levels of violence in society. Others claim that violence in society is the result of more fundamental social problems such as unemployment. How much do you think society is affected by violence in the media? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

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Despite knowing about criminal offences has been increasing by showing the inhumanity on the TV and on tv which is brunt to the community and
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influence our basic right which unemployment.
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essay will examine how the community is influenced by cruelty through the media.
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of all, by broadcasting Violence things on TV or in cinemas and
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by the media gives the negative brunt on the community. It is important by not to broadcast assault things on films which negatively impact on the uneducated or illiterate people.
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: an uneducated individual watching any fighting movie on TV that people took the idea of disorder and
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will learn how to save himself from
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movie by any punishment
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as the hiding of evidence.
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,
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will lead to the negative brunt on the nation.
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, media help responsible for broadcasting inhumanity things on tv, most of the people nowadays daily watch news whether educated or not. Whether media broadcast
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things for entertainment or awareness purpose, but any individual took the idea of violence from the media
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.
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, a man watching news that x individual made
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gun at home by doing
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method, illiterate took the idea of how to made gun at home.
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,
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will lead to the negative influence on society. Media and Filmmakers can play a vital role by aware the people and provides proper knowledge among people that inhumanity is affecting our society and
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by stop or not showing anything which is related to the assault. To conclude, showing contents which are related to violence will negatively influence the Environment of society and government should take necessary steps by making rules and Regulation so that will not affect our fundamental rights.
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