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Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possible. While others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Forma
l
Suggestion
The formal education system
education
 system focuses on sylla
bus or c
Suggestion
the syllabus
urriculum prescribed by educational experts. As today is the knowledge
age
, the things in the
education
 sector are in the era of competitiveness of getting
educa
tion. It
Suggestion
an education
can be seen that there is an enormous controversial of starting formal
education
 of students according to their
age
. I firmly state that the later the students start
school
education
, the better their
life
 will be. Many people opine that an early commencement of
school
education
 is better than late. They assume that when children enter into the
school
education
 early, they can have many opportunities for their academic performance. It is
right
 that they become more familiar with the
school
 subjects and objects since they were so young.
As a result
 of
this
, their tender mind becomes matur
er in t
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mature
he academic subje
cts especially math
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subjects, especially
ematics and language because of their improving logical thinking skills. But its weak point is that children can get easily depre
ssion or f
Suggestion
depressed
eel under the pressure due to entering early into the exam-based
education
 system with struggling in the
age
 of budding-flower.
On the other hand
, initiating textbook-based
education
 of children until the
age
 of seven has many positive impacts on their development. Home schooling well can make children mature and get
life
 skills. At the
age
 of well-playing and well-thinking, if a child plays and explore about the earth enough, his or her growth or development will be
right
 according to the stages. By
this
, I mean it can foster in developing the
right
brain
. Developing
right
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the right brain
brain
 well in the childhood makes children creative, innov
ation, ima
Suggestion
innovative
ginative and good at social skills.
Consequently
, parents or guardians can be aware of their children's innate abilities or talents so they can help them to fi
gured out
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figure
theirs.
Besides
, they can point out them to the
right
 path for their whole
life
. So it can be said that
right
Suggestion
the right brain
brain
 is the heart of
life
. All together, both have the advantages of each. As my point of view, to develop left
brain
 can be train
ed but
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trained, but
right
brain
 must be cultivated in the natural way. So to get the best outcomes in the future, students should be expos
ured syll
with no protection or shield
exposed
abus-based
education
 until the
age
 of seven.
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