Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In 2017 "Crazy Uzbek kid" was the sensation topic for all federal TVs in Uzbekistan.
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, the story of the kid began in Brooklyn, New York, when he was working at one of the moving companies in New York, and coping with his university education into his daily schedule. Linking Words
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, he was not satisfied with his work and he dropped out of his post at moving organization and at the university and came back to Uzbekistan promising his boss that he will create found a company and raise its worth to a billion-dollar company in a year. Surprisingly, Linking Words
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wish became reality for the kid, and his company now worth 5 billion dollars. Linking Words
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, he mentioned in his recent interview that "profession amusement" outweigh the position security in any possible way.
Forbes made the viral announcement recently discussing that 75% of Americans are unemployed because of the Coronavirus issue in the country. Linking Words
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, office happiness proponents were forcing on social media their point of view about the "work fulfilment". Linking Words
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, John from California left the comment saying "You should have been listen your heart and choose the career you like and you would not be in Linking Words
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situation right now". Supporters of spot security idea were devastated about Linking Words
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comment leaving their own opinion about it, "We still think job security is important, because if you are well educated and have gained worthwhile experience in the field where you're specialized than nothing can take your post away. Linking Words
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, even sometimes you are not satisfied about your work, but it pays well Linking Words
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you will have the opportunity to allow yourself anything you wish and Linking Words
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will outweigh the disadvantages of profession satisfaction.
In conclusion, I would prefer to always to take profession joy as the priority in the job-seeking process. Because, even if you are paying high, but not happy with what you are doing, it can be sacrificed every day for the employees. Linking Words
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, if you are satisfied with what you are doing, but getting paid less, by working hard and improving your skill in that field will definitely boost your income.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite