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Band 4

You have found an interesting website. Tell about the website to your friend. Tell the friend, how this website will help in education

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Dear Max, I would like to share with you a website for improving
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me in case of questions, With warm wishes, Siu Dear Max, I would like to share with you a website for improving
of
Remove the preposition
apply
show examples
your
English
Use synonyms
, it is
named
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called
show examples
 Coursera. I have just discovered
this
Linking Words
 source and I have been taking their
English
Use synonyms
 lessons since morning. Now, I
could
Wrong verb form
can
show examples
 see results, I am confident with
a
Correct article usage
the
show examples
 pronunciation of some difficult and complex words. My
English
Use synonyms
 tutor gave
its
Correct pronoun usage
me its
show examples
’ web address in our
last
Linking Words
 lesson.
I’ve
Verb problem
I do
show examples
 not
understood
Wrong verb form
understand
show examples
 why my teacher gave me the link only on the
last
Linking Words
 session before starting to scan it. There are huge materials for
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
learning
English
Use synonyms
,
with dividing
Wrong verb form
divided
show examples
 into four general parts.
Also
Linking Words
, you could send your writing tasks
to
Change preposition
for
show examples
evaluating
Replace the word
evaluation
show examples
by
Change preposition
apply
show examples
and
receiving of
Wrong verb form
receive
show examples
 feedback from tutors and other students. I found it
very
Correct article usage
a very
show examples
 useful and
the
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apply
show examples
motivating
site
Use synonyms
, where you easily get
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
information about the experiences of others in the comments. I would appreciate
if
Correct pronoun usage
it if
show examples
 you could find
this
Linking Words
site
Use synonyms
on
Change preposition
in
show examples
 the same way as I
found
Correct pronoun usage
found it
show examples
. Please do not hesitate to contact
with
Change preposition
apply
show examples
me in case of questions, With warm wishes, Siu

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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