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Some think that ambition is a good quality. Is it important to be ambitious? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

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 some individuals, being ambitious is a positive quality. In my opinion,
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 characteristic is the most vital one in all aspects of
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 among humans.
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,
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 quality has several useful features which make it, indeed,
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 habit.
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 is considered
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a trigger to achieve great impressive accomplishments in
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life
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, I believe. To be precise, only the most ambitious person can achieve what they want in his or her
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, as
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people
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 tend to be motivated and they adore what they do.
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,
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 motivated individuals listen to their inner voice and intuition, which make them successful in all spheres of
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,
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 as in friendship, career, family and hundreds of others, I admit.
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 of world-leading companies, namely Apple Corporation, Pixar Animation,
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 studio, Steve Jobs achieved all his milestones and goals only with the help of his
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 and eagerness.
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,
this
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 characteristic has many positive aspects. In my viewpoint, the most striking case of
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 positiveness is being flexible. Precisely, ambitious
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 do not give up their goals and milestones during
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 and downs of their
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life
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,
instead
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, they try to find other ways of reaching their destination and tend to
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any
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 kind of situation positively. I think,
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 fact about it, is
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 clear sign of its advantage side, which makes it
positive
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 characteristic among individuals. The findings of recent research conducted by scholars at the National University Board of England can be
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, here.
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 them, during
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 period of changes since human evolution, only
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 with
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 quality survived and they are likely to do so in the future, as well, with all respect to
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 flexibility created by
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.
To conclude
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,
ambition
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 is crucial in the personal development of humans, I believe.
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 to
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,
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 very characteristic,
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 become flexible
in
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 their whole
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, no matter in which situation they are
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task response
Ensure that your response clearly addresses all parts of the question in a direct and relevant manner. Focus on providing a more balanced view on the positive and negative aspects of ambition.
coherence cohesion
Continue to use linking words and cohesive devices to improve the overall coherence of the essay. Work on organizing the ideas in a more systematic and sequential manner to enhance the logical flow of the essay.
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