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The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in this era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists?

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In the recent times of technology, Some people think that
journalist
follow
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follows
 the duties to bring all the
intormation
a message received and understood
information
 to people?
However
, some believe not all are
adhere
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adhering
 to their ethics and power. I wholeheartedly, agree with the latter view. In today’s
senerio
an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenario
, it is significant to update ourselves with the world news. Who other than
Journalist
, are the front face
fightiers
someone who fights (or is fighting)
fighters
 who go out of the way and bring the information to you. A responsible and honest
journalist
 is like a soldier who fight a righteous battle to keep the citizen informed and eliminate corruption from our society.
For example
, we are constantly informed about deadly
coronovirus
relating to or characteristic of carnivores
carnivorous
 which helps us to keep ourselves updated.
However
, there is a strong
opine
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opinion
 that not all of them are truly responsible due to biased opinions and politics. There are times when news channel will focus on only one sided conversation which leads to telecast the advantages of
certain set
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a certain set
 of people. To illustrate
this
, Debate on a news channel will tend to telecast the good side of the speakers who supports the news channel. To recapitulate, I pen down saying that there
are
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is
 good
journalist
 who supports in the
favor
promote over another
favour
 of the ordinary people whereas there are bad
journalist
 as well. It’s our duty to cross verify the news and check the credibility of the sources which will help us to be aware about the correct news in the world.
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