Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Despite earning a huge amount of

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, famous people might affect society negatively according to some.

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, many others oppose

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opinion and assert these people have merits for their communities. Since entertainers are presumed as role-models by the majority of people, they might bring and expand some moral cultures which require the highest salary or bring immoral

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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among people, especially the youth. Nowadays, making

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a child who has lost both parents

orphans

offence

affluence

of other people is one of the ways which entertainers are using to attract more people to increase their followers and their income. There are many comedians who are trying to gain the attention of young generations by making sexiest racist or cultural jokes and telling them in funny and hilarious ways to entertain people.

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, young people who are sensitive and flexible in learning new things follow them and try to repeat their unsuitable jokes or imitated their gestures.

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, these kinds of entertainers are likely to teach immoral lessons alongside earning unfair

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from their plethora of followers.

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, appropriate cultures might be taught by celebrities. There are numerous famous people who are advantageous for their societies. Since these people wish to be popular based on the positive movements, they are attempting to show the moral aspects of their lives.

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example, some celebrities take part in charities in order to help poor people or seek for alleviating environmental problems by joining some campaigns and investing huge

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in these types of organizations.

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, people are liable to learn the culture of

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donating

to charities or the importance of the environment. For

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reason, these celebrities are deserved to be paid too much due to their movements for societies to flourish. I do opine that people should be cautious about the action of entertainers and their impacts on people’s minds and societies.

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, these impacts must be considered in

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case of a payment

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, entertainers should be paid based on their duties and the consequences of their jobs. In sum, the action of famous people and their impacts on people and societies should be taken into account,

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they achieve afflux

money

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regardless of their influences, or whether they deserve it.

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, by heightening the people's awareness, the negative effects of entertainers are likely to be limited and they earn less

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due to fewer followers