You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn’t able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

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Dear Yash, I hope you're taking sufficient rest and the hospital is providing proper treatment for your fast recovery, your accident is a very unfortunate tragedy for our squad because everyone believes that you are the most impactful player for our cricket club.

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weekend we had an extremely important match and not only our team but

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squad members of the opposite team were asking about you. Which shows how good a player you are.

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, I'm beyond thrilled

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letter and informing you that our club won the final match

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weekend. Me and Parth were the open batsmen and both of us secured 100 runes partnership and total scoreboard of our team was 250 runes, which is very high to chase for the opposition.

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, the first half was very crucial for our unit because the opposite lineup did an 80-run partnership on zero losses.

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, we changed our plan and gave an alternative chance to our spinner baller and fast baller, and the condition changed and we dismissed all the batsmen in the next 10 overs.

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, we won the final match. We celebrated a lot on that day and everyone decided to give

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winning credit to you

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because your game strategies helped us to win

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match. We all are praying for your fast recovery and hoping that you will rejoin our club as soon as possible. Yours truly, Vairag.

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure clear transitions between ideas for better flow, and try to separate different points into distinct paragraphs without merging too many ideas.

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Include a brief introduction to the letter before diving into the details of the match to provide context.

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The letter effectively conveys a warm and supportive tone, which is suitable for addressing a friend.

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You included detailed information about the match, showcasing your enthusiasm and allowing your friend to feel included in the event.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

240 words

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