The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

There is no doubt that the Internet
bring
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brings
huge innovation for
whole globe
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the whole globe
, especially for lives and economies.
However
, some people look on the opposite site, in which they see that it is turning the world into a global village and soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. Thanks to the invention of
Internet
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the Internet
, people all over the world are brought to be much closer than the past. Nowadays, the geographical distance is not a problem in human life with the help of the Internet and many communication applications,
such
as yahoo, Facebook,
twitter
a series of chirps
Twitter
. People are allowed to make friends everywhere,
therefore
, human life becomes more comfortable after high- pressure work or studies. It is obvious that the Internet plays a vital role in economies. In modern society, all of economic information is transferred by Internet with a fast rate which never had in the past, it helps
businessman
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the businessman
to make
reasonable decision
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a reasonable decision
reasonable decisions
in
right time
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the right time
.
However
, there is a question raised by some people, whether everybody will think and behave in the same way. There is a fact that, accompanying with the decrease of geographical distance and globalization
megatrend
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Megatrend
, the traditional barriers are gradually erased. Some weak nations may be affected by some strong nations' tradition. People from these countries, especially the young tend to follow trends, most of which comes from strong- economy nations.
This
trends
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trend
may be the way of thinking, the
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
, the fashion or the entertainment.
As a result
, the national identity is being threatened to be
delete
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deleted
.
To
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In
conclusion, the Internet streamed our lives and economies evidently, but
government
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the government
should have solutions to protect national
idenity
the distinct personality of an individual regarded as a persisting entity
identity
while the globalization is happening rapidly now.
Submitted by gvaisova on

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