The charts below show one government's spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in Arts events in the same years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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report is intended to give a brief summary about
the relationship between the Change preposition
of
government
's spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number
of people
participating in Arts
events in the years mentioned.
From the chart below we can deduce that the spending of the Government
on the Arts
were
quite similar in 1995 and 2005.
The major change is Change the verb form
was
on
Change preposition
in
"Theatre"
field where compared with 1995, the spending almost doubled.
Despite Correct article usage
the "Theatre"
of
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apply
this
change, the number
of people
going at
Change preposition
to
theatre
did not Correct article usage
the theatre
increased
significantly.
Change the verb form
increase
Overall
, we can find almost the same amount of people
participating in arts
events in 2005 compared with 1995. The spending of the Government
on visual arts
suffered a major change,
and was reduced, and almost proportional Remove the comma
apply
the
Change preposition
to the
number
of people
interested in visual arts
was diminished in 2005.
Music is the most popular art form and in 1995 the Government
spent most
money on Add an article
the most
this
, but the amount they spent on
1995 dropped slightly in 2005. Change preposition
in
However
the Add a comma
,However
number
of people
attending music events raised a lot between 1995 and 2005.Submitted by gvaisova on
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