Internet je uveo mnogo promjena u naš svakodnevni život. U današnje vrijeme stvari kao što su slanje pošte, kontaktiranje, bankarstvo i komunikacija radimo mnogo brže. Imaju li ovi događaji više prednosti nego nedostataka?

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Odabir mjesta za život jedno je
od
najvažnijih pitanja u životu novog učenika. Danas mnogi mladi ljudi više vole živjeti
kod
ku
će
, u obitelji, ne mijenjajući svoj dosadašnji način života, dok drugi vjeruju da s ulaskom na sveučilište osoba postaje odrasla osoba i treba naučiti sama rješavati svakodnevne probleme, snosi odgovornost i stječe potrebno životno iskustvo. Neki ljudi obično ostaju u svom rodnom gradu i nastavljaju svoj život na istom mjestu. Međutim, neki drugi vole doživjeti novu avanturu u
novom
okruženju. Iz nekih razloga zbog kojih vjerujem da
vam
novo iskustvo
može
u potpunosti pomoći u vašem budućem životu. Mnogo ćete uštedjeti živeći
kod
ku
će
, čak i ako roditelji odluče da trebate platiti na svoj način i napunite neku najamninu ili doprinesete obiteljskim blagajnama. Jeftinije je kuhati i jesti obiteljske obroke nego ovdje plaćati sitne zalogaje. Položaj mjesta u kojem živite ima velik utjecaj na izbor smještaja. Ako se mjesto studija nalazi dovoljno daleko
od
ku
će
,
student
osim zabrinutosti zbog studija
može
uočiti i problem prijevoza do i do sveučilišta. Ako živite
kod
ku
će
, onda ne možete osjetiti slobodu, punoću studentskog života, također ne možete sudjelovati u svim važnim sveučilišnim događajima poput studentskih inicijacija, zabava i sportskih događanja. Također, ljudi brzo nauče riješiti razne kućanske zadatke, koji osobu čine samozatajnijom i spremnijom za budući život. Osoba brzo uči važne stvari kao što su kuhanje, čišćenje, pranje rublja i sve kombinira sa svojim studijama, dok žive
kod
ku
će
s roditeljima malo je vjerojatno da će tako brzo naučiti tako važne stvari. Štoviše, život u hostelu rješava jedan
od
glavnih problema u životu mladih. Problem
vremenske
organizacije
. Studenti vrijeme mudro koriste. Ako živite u spavaonici, mama vas ne
će
probuditi svaki dan da biste zakasnili na nastavu. Nitko
vam
ne
će
kuhati niti napraviti čišćenje. Morat ćete mudro upravljati vremenom kako biste ga uhvatili na vrijeme: rad
kod
ku
će
, škole, sporta i još mnogo toga ... To je iskustvo koje će
vam
svakako
biti
korisno u budućnosti. Suprotno tome, nekoliko je razloga zbog kojih studenti odluče živjeti
kod
ku
će
. Glavni razlog je taj što
student
može
živjeti
kod
ku
će
bez najma, ima nekoga tko će mu kuhati i čistiti i općenito je zgodnije. Također, osoba je u obitelji s voljenim osobama, u atmosferi ugode i topline, a da ne spominjemo puno prijatelja koji žive u blizini. Pored toga, učenje
kod
ku
će
može
biti
učinkovitije i korisnije jer ne postoji nijedan
od
glavnih iritansa koji vas
može
zaustaviti - Buka. Nitko vas ne
će
ometati; pravite buku (svi znamo koliko su bučne zabave u hostelima). Možete ići spavati i ne razmišljati o tome što će vaš cimer
biti
budan cijelu noć kako bi podučavao matematiku i mrmljao pod njegovim dahom, onemogućujući
vam
da se odmarate. Na primjer, vrlo je teško ići spavati, kada moj susjed neprestano obavlja doma
će
zada
će
noći po svjetlu, što vas sprečava kao razdražljivo letenje, a ujutro se osjećate umornije nego odmorni. Mislim da je najbolje
biti
obrazovan
od
ku
će
. Na primjer, planiram otići na Saobraćajni fakultet i imam mogućnost odlaska u Sarajevo ili Doboj,
place
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Place
to live is
one
of the most important issues in the
life
of the new
student
. Today, many young people prefer to live at
home
, in the family, without changing their past way of
life
, while others believe that with university entrance, a
person
becomes an adult and he needs to learn to solve everyday problems himself, bears responsibility and gets the necessary
life
experience
. Some people tend to stay in their hometown and continue their
life
in the same
place
.
However
, some others like to
experience
a new adventure in a new environment. There are some reasons that make me believe a new
experience
can help you in your future
life
totally. You will save a lot by living at
home
, even if your parents decide you need to pay your own way and stump up some rent or contribute more to the family coffers. It’s cheaper to cook and eat family meals than paying for little bits here. The location of the
place
where you live has a big impact on the choice of your accommodation. If the
place
of study is located sufficiently far away from
home
, a
student
in addition
to concerns about the study may see the problem of transport to and from the university. If you live at
home
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home, then
then
you not able to feel the freedom, fullness of
student
life
,
also
, yon cannot participate in all important university events
such
as
student
initiations, parties and
sport
Suggestion
sporting
events
.
Accept space
.
Also
, people quickly learn to solve various household tasks, which make
person
more self-reliant and prepared for future
life
. The
person
quickly learns important things
such
as cooking, cleaning, laundry, and combines it all with their studies, while living at
home
with their parents are unlikely to quickly learn so important things.
Moreover
,
life
in the hostel solves
one
of the main problems in the lives of young people.
the
Suggestion
The
Problem of
time
organization
Suggestion
organizing
. Students begin to use
time
wisely. If you live in a dorm,
then
mommy
Suggestion
Mommy
many
money
will not wake you up every day to keep you late for class. No
one
will cook for you or make cleaning. You’ll have to manage your
time
wisely to catch it in
time
: work at
home
, school, sports and much more.. It is an
experience
that will be useful in future, for sure.
In contrast
, there are several reasons why students choose to live at
home
. The main reason is that
student
Suggestion
the student
students
a student
can live at
home
rent-free, he has someone to do
cooking
Suggestion
the cooking
and cleaning for him and it is generally more convenient.
Also
, a
person
is in a family with loved ones, in an atmosphere of comfort and warmth, not to mention a lot of friends living nearby.
Furthermore
, learning at
home
can be more effective and more useful because there is no
one
of the main irritants that can stop you – The noise. No
one
will interrupt you; make noise (we all know how noisy parties are in hostels). You can go to sleep and not think about what your roommate will be up all night to teach math and mumble under his breath,
thus
preventing you to rest.
For example
, it is very difficult to go to sleep, when my
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
gets constantly
make
Suggestion
done
do
his homework
of
Suggestion
on
for
the night by the light of, which prevents
you as
Accept comma addition
you, as
irritable fly, and in the morning you feel more tired than rested. I think it is best to be educated from
home
.
For example
, I plan to go to the Faculty of Transportation and I have the option to go to Sarajevo or Doboj, but I chose Doboj because it is closer and I can travel while I have to rent an apartment in Sarajevo.
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