Internet je uveo mnogo promjena u naš svakodnevni život. U današnje vrijeme stvari kao što su slanje pošte, kontaktiranje, bankarstvo i komunikacija radimo mnogo brže. Imaju li ovi događaji više prednosti nego nedostataka?

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Odabir mjesta za život jedno je

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najvažnijih pitanja u životu novog učenika. Danas mnogi mladi ljudi više vole živjeti

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, u obitelji, ne mijenjajući svoj dosadašnji način života, dok drugi vjeruju da s ulaskom na sveučilište osoba postaje odrasla osoba i treba naučiti sama rješavati svakodnevne probleme, snosi odgovornost i stječe potrebno životno iskustvo. Neki ljudi obično ostaju u svom rodnom gradu i nastavljaju svoj život na istom mjestu. Međutim, neki drugi vole doživjeti novu avanturu u

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okruženju. Iz nekih razloga zbog kojih vjerujem da

vam

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novo iskustvo

može

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u potpunosti pomoći u vašem budućem životu. Mnogo ćete uštedjeti živeći

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će

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, čak i ako roditelji odluče da trebate platiti na svoj način i napunite neku najamninu ili doprinesete obiteljskim blagajnama. Jeftinije je kuhati i jesti obiteljske obroke nego ovdje plaćati sitne zalogaje. Položaj mjesta u kojem živite ima velik utjecaj na izbor smještaja. Ako se mjesto studija nalazi dovoljno daleko

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će

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student

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osim zabrinutosti zbog studija

može

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uočiti i problem prijevoza do i do sveučilišta. Ako živite

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će

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, onda ne možete osjetiti slobodu, punoću studentskog života, također ne možete sudjelovati u svim važnim sveučilišnim događajima poput studentskih inicijacija, zabava i sportskih događanja. Također, ljudi brzo nauče riješiti razne kućanske zadatke, koji osobu čine samozatajnijom i spremnijom za budući život. Osoba brzo uči važne stvari kao što su kuhanje, čišćenje, pranje rublja i sve kombinira sa svojim studijama, dok žive

kod

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će

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s roditeljima malo je vjerojatno da će tako brzo naučiti tako važne stvari. Štoviše, život u hostelu rješava jedan

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glavnih problema u životu mladih. Problem

vremenske

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organizacije

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. Studenti vrijeme mudro koriste. Ako živite u spavaonici, mama vas ne

će

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probuditi svaki dan da biste zakasnili na nastavu. Nitko

vam

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će

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kuhati niti napraviti čišćenje. Morat ćete mudro upravljati vremenom kako biste ga uhvatili na vrijeme: rad

kod

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će

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, škole, sporta i još mnogo toga ... To je iskustvo koje će

vam

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svakako

biti

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korisno u budućnosti. Suprotno tome, nekoliko je razloga zbog kojih studenti odluče živjeti

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će

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. Glavni razlog je taj što

student

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može

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živjeti

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će

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bez najma, ima nekoga tko će mu kuhati i čistiti i općenito je zgodnije. Također, osoba je u obitelji s voljenim osobama, u atmosferi ugode i topline, a da ne spominjemo puno prijatelja koji žive u blizini. Pored toga, učenje

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će

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može

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biti

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učinkovitije i korisnije jer ne postoji nijedan

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glavnih iritansa koji vas

može

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zaustaviti - Buka. Nitko vas ne

će

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ometati; pravite buku (svi znamo koliko su bučne zabave u hostelima). Možete ići spavati i ne razmišljati o tome što će vaš cimer

biti

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budan cijelu noć kako bi podučavao matematiku i mrmljao pod njegovim dahom, onemogućujući

vam

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da se odmarate. Na primjer, vrlo je teško ići spavati, kada moj susjed neprestano obavlja doma

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zada

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noći po svjetlu, što vas sprečava kao razdražljivo letenje, a ujutro se osjećate umornije nego odmorni. Mislim da je najbolje

biti

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obrazovan

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će

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. Na primjer, planiram otići na Saobraćajni fakultet i imam mogućnost odlaska u Sarajevo ili Doboj,

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place

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Place

to live is

one

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of the most important issues in the

life

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of the new

student

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. Today, many young people prefer to live at

home

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, in the family, without changing their past way of

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, while others believe that with university entrance, a

person

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becomes an adult and he needs to learn to solve everyday problems himself, bears responsibility and gets the necessary

life

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experience

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. Some people tend to stay in their hometown and continue their

life

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in the same

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, some others like to

experience

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a new adventure in a new environment. There are some reasons that make me believe a new

experience

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can help you in your future

life

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totally. You will save a lot by living at

home

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, even if your parents decide you need to pay your own way and stump up some rent or contribute more to the family coffers. It’s cheaper to cook and eat family meals than paying for little bits here. The location of the

place

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where you live has a big impact on the choice of your accommodation. If the

place

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of study is located sufficiently far away from

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, a

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to concerns about the study may see the problem of transport to and from the university. If you live at

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home, then

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you not able to feel the freedom, fullness of

student

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life

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also

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, yon cannot participate in all important university events

such

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initiations, parties and

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sporting

events

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, people quickly learn to solve various household tasks, which make

person

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more self-reliant and prepared for future

life

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. The

person

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quickly learns important things

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as cooking, cleaning, laundry, and combines it all with their studies, while living at

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with their parents are unlikely to quickly learn so important things.

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life

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in the hostel solves

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of the main problems in the lives of young people.

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organization

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organizing

. Students begin to use

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wisely. If you live in a dorm,

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mommy

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Mommy

many

money

will not wake you up every day to keep you late for class. No

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will cook for you or make cleaning. You’ll have to manage your

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wisely to catch it in

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: work at

home

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, school, sports and much more.. It is an

experience

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that will be useful in future, for sure.

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, there are several reasons why students choose to live at

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. The main reason is that

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the student

students

a student

can live at

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rent-free, he has someone to do

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the cooking

and cleaning for him and it is generally more convenient.

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, a

person

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is in a family with loved ones, in an atmosphere of comfort and warmth, not to mention a lot of friends living nearby.

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, learning at

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can be more effective and more useful because there is no

one

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of the main irritants that can stop you – The noise. No

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will interrupt you; make noise (we all know how noisy parties are in hostels). You can go to sleep and not think about what your roommate will be up all night to teach math and mumble under his breath,

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preventing you to rest.

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, it is very difficult to go to sleep, when my

neighbor

a person who lives (or is located) near another

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gets constantly

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done

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for

the night by the light of, which prevents

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you, as

irritable fly, and in the morning you feel more tired than rested. I think it is best to be educated from

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, I plan to go to the Faculty of Transportation and I have the option to go to Sarajevo or Doboj, but I chose Doboj because it is closer and I can travel while I have to rent an apartment in Sarajevo.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Some people believe using modern technology (digital photographs, blogs) is the best way to record and remember important personal events. Others think the traditional method (making photo albums, writing diaries) is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission outweighthe diadvantages ?

Some people believe that governments should have access to people’s mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.