The charts below show one government's spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in Arts events in the same years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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report provides us with two graphs that give a brief summary about
the relationship between the Change preposition
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Government
's spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in Arts events in the years mentioned.
Overall
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both charts is occupied by music, Change preposition
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while
literature has got the lowest numbers.
If we take a closer look at the pie chart, we can see that Government
spending on theatre almost doubled between 1995 and 2005. The quantity
of people participating in Change the quantifier
number
this
event increased, too, but not significantly.
Government
spending on visual arts suffered a major change – it decreased almost two times, while
the audience experienced only an incremental decline in its numbers. A little increase in the amount of Government
spending happened in literature
, which fully corresponds to the bigger figures in the bar chart.
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the
music, which is the most popular art form, the Correct article usage
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Government
spent a little less money on it in 2005. However
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,However
the
public attendance here grew by about 30,000 people between 1995 and 2005.Correct article usage
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