In schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts while boys like science. What are the reasons for this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed?

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It is true that the majority of young males decide to
study
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science while females prefer arts in schools all over the world. Finding the reasons for
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phenomenon is important for the educators in vocational classes to give a reasonable advice to students. There are many factors for boys and girls choosing different subjects.
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, gender-specific personalities and competence leads to the courses students wish to
study
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. In fact, since female students are more
skillful
having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
skilful
, creative and more patient, they are attracted to art subjects
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as languages or literature, while males share
common interest
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a common interest
in several fields that require considerable analytical abilities to excel at, like maths or engineering.
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, in order to be fit in society with
common conception
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a common conception
common conceptions
about jobs and genders, many students do not dare to choose subjects that they really interested in.
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,
although
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some young males, caring and thoughtful, are fond of working as a nurse, they choose another job as people think true men will not do nursing. Students should have
freedom
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the freedom
to choose what they want to
study
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regardless of genders.
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, if students are forced to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
in unwanted courses, it would produce undesirable outcome, even resentment or negative feeling toward school.
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would not provide a quality employee for the
work force
the force of workers available
workforce
when he graduates.
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, by choosing a suitable subject to
study
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, students can best cultivate their skills and abilities, which inspires them in pursuing their goal.
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, they would be not only successful in
learning process
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the learning process
, but
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satisfied as they can do what they want to. In conclusion, beside the distinct characteristic and competence between genders, social misconception
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has an effect on choosing a specific
courses
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course
.
This
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should be reconsidered to give students freedom to learn what they really want.
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