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The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table illustrates the percentages of
students
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 giving good reviews for different aspects
such
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 as teaching, library resources,
student
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 services, range of modules, sports and social facilities in McGill University in 2005, 2010, and 2015.
Overall
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, most aspects of the university had become better for
students
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while
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 some declined or stay the same. In 2005, most
students
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 think that library resources were the best aspect, with 86% giving it a good rating. The least amount of good rating was the
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 of modules offered
being
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 39%. Just above half of the
students
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 think
student
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 services are excellent. Meanwhile, the
percent
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 of
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student
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students
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 giving facilities and teaching quality a good score is 65% and 74%, respectively. The approval rate for
student
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 services had risen significantly to 81% in 2010 and to 95% in 2015. The percentage given for teaching quality declined by 2% in 2010
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then
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 increased to 78% in 2015. Ratings for library resources
also
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 increased by just 2% in 2010 and dropped by 1% in 2015 of modules offered
has
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decreased over the years from 39% to 25% in 2015. Sports and social facilities
rating
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ratings
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 stay the same through the years.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, student with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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