The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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who visited four different tourist attractions in England in 1999.

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, I will summarise the information and report the main info, and make comparisons in paragraphs. The pie chart depicts the substantial attractions that people have visited in 1999.

Although

tourists have visited "

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parks

37%" the most.

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, the

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large portion of "Museums and Galleries 37%" takes place in the pie chart.

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less-visited spot on the list is "Wildlife

parks

and Zoos 9%" which

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times fewer than "

Theme

Parks

" stats.

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the "Historic Houses and Monuments" in the neutral post with 16% and 2 times less visited than "Museums and Galleries" Going into more detail, the table chart reports the detailed areas where tourists have visited in "

Theme

Parks

". The most substantial area in the list

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pleasure beach"

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47% compared to the most fewer visited spots "Legoland, Windsor" and "Chessington world of adventures" with only 10%. "Alton Towers 17%" and "Pleasureland, Southport 16%" visitors differ only for one

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. In conclusion, It's obvious that in 1999, People were interested more in "

Theme

Parks

",

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there were "Museums and Galleries" fans too. Somehow, in 1999, Wildlife

Parks

and Zoos were not so popular

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in

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the community.