Because of your job, you have to move to a new city. Write a letter to someone you know who lives there. In your letter ask them to help you find somewhere to live tell them the kind of accommodation you want to find tell them which area of the city you want to live in You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………….

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Dear John, I hope everything is fine at your end. I'

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letter to ask you a favour to help me with finding accommodation in your city. I'll give you more details.

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, I'll tell you good news that I found a job in your city Khobar, where you live, and I need your support to find a flat or a house to live in with my family. I'

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pretty sure that you have a lot of connections with multiple real states companies, which can help me immensely. You know, I have two kids, and my wife, so that I'

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looking for a medium-size house to give some extra space for my children. I'd prefer a home with a garden, and equipped with a modern kitchen, as you know, my wife adores cooking. I suggest that if you can find a place close to the city centre, it will be an excellent opportunity to find a high-quality school for my children. If I were to choose, I'd select somewhere close to

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waiting for your response, and keep in touch. Best regards, Ibrahim

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

186 words

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