You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter * give details of your course * explain why you need a week off * say what you want the Principal to do. *

Respected sir, madam I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I was enrolled in a computer hardware course in July , final exams are to be held in August and I am studying very well to score highest marks, but I got emergency at my house due to which I am requesting one week holidays. My father is suffering from a serious illness, he is admitted

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a hospital

from

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for

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last

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the last

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few days. I am

only

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male in my family because I have one younger sister and my mother has to look after her and my grandparents. My mother is suffering from difficulties she has to look after my father and her medications. So, I am requesting a week off to help my family in

this

hard time.

Moreover

, I can’t focus on my studies due to

this

stress. Due to one week laps in my studies, I will not

able

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cover

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certain topics of a subject. I am requesting

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you to

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please, arrange extra classes to cover my studies.Hope you will understand my situation and accept my request. yours

sincerly

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sincerely

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

182 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter * give details of your course * explain why you need a week off * say what you want the Principal to do. *

The Closing

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.

Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks, and motorcycles are banned from the city center. Public transportation like buses, taxis, and metros are advised. To what extent do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages

Write about the following topic. Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

-Some parents believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe that it should remain a foundational subject whether or not it is used later in life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to living in a big apartment building. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.