You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter * give details of your course * explain why you need a week off * say what you want the Principal to do. *

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Respected sir, madam I am writing

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letter to inform you that I was enrolled in a computer hardware course in July , final exams are to be held in August and I am studying very well to score highest marks, but I got emergency at my house due to which I am requesting one week holidays. My father is suffering from a serious illness, he is admitted

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a hospital

from

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for

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last

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the last

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few days. I am

only

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male in my family because I have one younger sister and my mother has to look after her and my grandparents. My mother is suffering from difficulties she has to look after my father and her medications. So, I am requesting a week off to help my family in

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hard time.

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, I can’t focus on my studies due to

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stress. Due to one week laps in my studies, I will not

able

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cover

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certain topics of a subject. I am requesting

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you to

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please, arrange extra classes to cover my studies.Hope you will understand my situation and accept my request. yours

sincerly

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sincerely

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

182 words

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The Closing

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procrastination in the tasks. what is the cause? how to tackle this problem?

Many employees may work at home with modern technology. Some claim that it can benefit only the workers not the employers. Do you agree or disagree?

The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: – A brief introduction of yourself – Your experience and relevant skills – Why you want the job