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“The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers.” What do you think about this opinion?

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Some say that the easiest and the most efficient way to learn English is to study with the native speakers.
However
, some disagree and say the opposite. I,
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ersonally disagree with
this
 statement because it's different for people and not everyone is the same.
However
,
I
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can agree that you will need help from the native speakers to just check up on your
level
 of professionalism.You may be questioning me by saying how do I know
this
 all?W
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Well, for
the past 5 years I have been studying at the British school of Tashkent.While working with the professional English speakers, I have
also
 been attending private English lessons during my free time.My
teacher
,
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r.B
akhtiyor,
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s not a native English speaker from Britain but he is a
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a
professor that worked with different people that have started English from Beginning.I can proudly say that my English
level
 wouldn't be high if I didn't attend his lessons.Now my IELTS is 6.5 overall(
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ith his help).But I
also
 think that my school helped me to improve and support the language I was learning.I am sure that without my school my speaking
level
 would be low and without a private
t
eacher my
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teacher, my
grammar
 and vocabulary
level
 would
also
 be low.But a native speaker is not necessarily needed in order to learn
grammar
 because there is always an English
teacher
 who knows
grammar
 very well. In conclusion As I mentioned before,
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verall there are different people who require different ways of learning.I can say,
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o get an intermediate
level
 of English students need a well
grammar
 and vocabulary
teacher
 and a native speaker in order to balance your e
nglish.
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
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