In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one’s own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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own family is becoming a growing trend in some countries of the world. In my opinion, I believe that gaining knowledge about the family tree

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gives knowledge about

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ancestral background and technology has made it easily accessible. One of the prominent causes that, why

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want to know about their family

history

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is because it is easy to access nowadays.

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, the technology provides a platform for many companies,

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, Ancestry.com which is an online company

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uses DNA testing as one of its tools. It uses

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testing as the basis for the revelation of

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ancestral background. Another cause to research about family

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is immigration. Many

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have immigrated to new countries and adapted to new cultures, so the curiosity to know about their forefathers and where they actually belonged to, is increased in new generations. It is definitely a positive development to know about

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roots. As

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come to know about their family

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, the stronger bond they build with their cultures.

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, an Italian immigrant working in

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country loses his culture eventually and his

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can hardly relate to Italian culture, but now

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the technological world,

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mostly know about their past and families.

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helps

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to connect to

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far and distant relatives which

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would have been impossible.

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, it has many health benefits as they can know about some genetic disease or hereditary traits, which is common in their family. In conclusion,

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know they have more avenues and can research their families and

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sometimes reconnect with their loved ones.

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