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You have received a letter from your landlord, Mr Matthews, asking you to renew your contract and pay more rent. You are happy in the property but the landlord has not been maintaining it well.

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Dear Mr.Matthews, I have received your letter, for renewing the contract and pay more rent. I’m interested to continue
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 12months. Since, it is very convenient to my office, bus stand, kids’ school, hospital, Gym. So, I want to negotiate terms.
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, at the same time, it behoves me to mention the problems. In Living room floor matt having big holes everywhere, because of
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 it is very difficult to walk in the room, kitchen sink water is not flushing out properly, and in backyards, fences are getting rusted and broken apart. All
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 problem I have notified you many times with photos through email and over the phone. It is almost a year, still it is not fixed. I would request to take immediate action to fix the above-mentioned issues, before the contract renewed. If for any reason the problems are not fixed, I would stay with the current contract terms.
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