Topic. Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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academic success is becoming challenging as the day goes by, and so, scholars put in enormous effort in a bid to succeed, as
such
, individuals come up with varying opinions. Some think that better results are achieved through group studying,
however
,
others
still believe that solitary learning is more effective, I will try to dissect these diverging views in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, the importance of learning in groups cannot be
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, it offers the individuals involved the opportunity to explore each other's knowledge and grasp
one
or two things from another person's perspective.
Furthermore
, it reduces errors, because, by the involvement of more than
one
person, most mistakes could be spotted and corrected.
For example
, during my undergraduate thesis, there were calculations I got wrong during independent study, but when I involved a friend of mine, the error was discovered and
subsequently
rectified.
Nonetheless
,
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with
others
also
has its demerits, it can bring about distraction,
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of concentration and could even lead to defaulting in learning.
One
or two of the members could even decide to seek
for
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fun rather than the task at hand, which may in turn discourage
others
.
For instance
, there was a time during my college days when a group of my friends
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I planned to go to an evening class to read, it happened that a few didn't show up, but rather decided to go partying, the rest of us were demoralized and the class didn't hold. In conclusion,
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with
others
could be very beneficial,
although
one
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to be careful to go with like minds to avoid being dispirited.
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Ensure that your essay addresses both sides of the argument in a balanced manner. Support your points with clear examples and give a well-reasoned opinion at the end.
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Your essay is generally well-organized, but make sure that your ideas flow logically and that your examples are well-connected to your points.

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