Topic. Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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academic success is becoming challenging as the day goes by, and so, scholars put in enormous effort in a bid to succeed, as

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, individuals come up with varying opinions. Some think that better results are achieved through group studying,

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,

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still believe that solitary learning is more effective, I will try to dissect these diverging views in the following paragraphs.

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, the importance of learning in groups cannot be

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, it offers the individuals involved the opportunity to explore each other's knowledge and grasp

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or two things from another person's perspective.

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, it reduces errors, because, by the involvement of more than

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person, most mistakes could be spotted and corrected.

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, during my undergraduate thesis, there were calculations I got wrong during independent study, but when I involved a friend of mine, the error was discovered and

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rectified.

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has its demerits, it can bring about distraction,

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of concentration and could even lead to defaulting in learning.

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or two of the members could even decide to seek

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fun rather than the task at hand, which may in turn discourage

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, there was a time during my college days when a group of my friends

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I planned to go to an evening class to read, it happened that a few didn't show up, but rather decided to go partying, the rest of us were demoralized and the class didn't hold. In conclusion,

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could be very beneficial,

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to be careful to go with like minds to avoid being dispirited.