Some people believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. Others, however, believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Why?

The importance of the appropriate age of sending children to

school

, which was always debatable, has now become controversial. With many people claiming that toddlers should start

school

as soon as possible, while others reject the notion In my opinion, the latter preposition appears to be more rational. To embark on, there are myriad of reasons which will

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elaborate

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argument but

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argument, but

the most preponderant one stems from the fact that, most parents want their infants to join the

school

to inculcate the fundamental rights early. It is irrefutable that

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is the age when a child's cognitive development occurs at full pace and schools are the suitable place to provide them ample opportunities to learn and grab new things as compared to home. The

second

contributing factor is

hectic work

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hectic, work

-life. Recent research suggests that 60 percent of parents in the whole world are working,

thus

it is highly unlikely that they can stay with their young ones and manage their work simultaneously.

Moreover

, not only do they have trust issues with care-

givers but

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givers, but

also

cannot afford

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the expense

.

However

, there are some pitfalls that negate

this

argument and considering a significant number of points that can be interpreted. The most alarming one rooted

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the fact that children till the age of six or seven should spend time with their parents to learn moral values at home as they learn what they see and observe from their surroundings.

In addition

to

this

, pressure in schools may ruin the ability of infants to play freely and learn from nature. Most of the time schools are accused of restricting their freedom and damage their childhood and innocence.

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instance according

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instance, according

to a startling new research, Washington has revealed that early education puts too much emphasis on formal learning and robs children of their creative ability. To reiterate, after having

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great deal of discussion and deliberation on

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topic on my own, I arrive at the decision that, despite the numerous benefits of

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early schools

school

, infants should not be sent to

school

in order to protect them from

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the dire consequences

and provide them enough exposure to cherish their childhood.