The bar chart shows the percentage of young people in higher education in 2000, 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart compares the ratio of young
people
in 4 countries who entered higher training from 2000 to 2010. Overall
, the participation rate of young people
studying higher discipline
was on the increase in these countries, with the exception of Fix the agreement mistake
disciplines
country
B. In addition
, going into higher education
among young people
in country
D was more popular than those in other countries.
In 2000, 60% of young people
in country
D participated in university education
while
the percentage of those in country
C coming to university was 10% lower. The participation rate of young people
in tertiary education
in country
A and B was lowest at 40%.
In the Fix the agreement mistake
countries
next
10 years, the percentage of young people
participating in higher education
in country
D increased suddenly to 80% while
a gradual increase of 20% was seen in the figure for country
A. In contrast
, the participation rate of young people
in higher education
in country
C just grew slightly to over 50% in 2010 whereas
there was no change in the percentage of students among young people
in country
B at 40% during the given period.Submitted by Bui Quyen on
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