The bar chart shows the percentage of young people in higher education in 2000, 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart compares the ratio of young
people
in 4 countries who entered higher training from 2000 to 2010. Use synonyms
Overall
, the participation rate of young Linking Words
people
studying higher Use synonyms
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was on the increase in these countries, with the exception of Fix the agreement mistake
disciplines
country
B. Use synonyms
In addition
, going into higher Linking Words
education
among young Use synonyms
people
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D was more popular than those in other countries.
In 2000, 60% of young Use synonyms
people
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D participated in university Use synonyms
education
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while
the percentage of those in Linking Words
country
C coming to university was 10% lower. The participation rate of young Use synonyms
people
in tertiary Use synonyms
education
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A and B was lowest at 40%.
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10 years, the percentage of young Linking Words
people
participating in higher Use synonyms
education
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country
D increased suddenly to 80% Use synonyms
while
a gradual increase of 20% was seen in the figure for Linking Words
country
A. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the participation rate of young Linking Words
people
in higher Use synonyms
education
in Use synonyms
country
C just grew slightly to over 50% in 2010 Use synonyms
whereas
there was no change in the percentage of students among young Linking Words
people
in Use synonyms
country
B at 40% during the given period.Use synonyms
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