Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.  To what extend do you agree with this view?

Nowadays, a lot of researchers have been studying the importance of culture and arts in the person's life, and they have realized that the arts may change and improve how people think and do things in their lives.

However some

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However, some

governments have been thinking to lower the investment in the arts and place in public service.

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of all, I strongly believe that investments in the arts are very important because we need form a population thinking not just people that do what have to do but think and realize ways to do stuff with another perceptive.

For instance

, there are many researching in the world about the benefits of being involved with the arts can save people like when a person is depressive and start play an instrument as a consequence getting better. Of course I agree that investments in public service are essential,

thus

cannot eliminate or reduce the money for the arts.

Moreover both

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Moreover, both

are vital for the population and governments need to consider to keep investments. To conclude, I strongly agree with keeping both investments and think and another way to save many and never financing arts will be wasting money.