In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

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The more developed economy become, the more citizens decide to purchase

food

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from overseas

instead

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of their own nation.

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essay will illustrate possible causes that give rise to

this

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phenomenon and offer some feasible recommendations. There is a growing tendency nowadays for

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reported consumption.

Firstly

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, with

fast pace

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the fast pace

of life as well as globalisation, people always want to try something new and different. They

mey

expresses possibility

may

get bored and lose interested in local

food

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products. Because

those

plural of "this"

these

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food

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foods

are too familiar with them.

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, consumers tend to ignore

food

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from

homeland

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the homeland

and

buy

Used in specifying adjacent dimensions

others from different

coutries

a politically organized body of people under a single government

countries

cultures

all around the world.

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, there

are

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a huge amount of reported

food

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having higher quality compared with local

food

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. Despite of the

hight

greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount

high

cost,

inhabitants

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the inhabitants

still want to buy them because they believe that they are better for human health.

For instance

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, grapes, apples or cherries from

developed

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developing

coutries

a politically organized body of people under a single government

countries

such

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as America, Australia,...

are

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Are

always welcomed enthusiastically. To encourage consumers to buy

food

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produced locally, the following suggestions should be taken into consideration.

Food

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companies have to promote advertising campaigns on social media or anywhere people come across.

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make

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makes

citizens know more about the information

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about

food

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products.

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, government shot join hands in resolving the issue. Authority ought to subsidize money and give policy for

food

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industry.

Hence

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food

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companies are able to upgrade and more develop. Thanks to

this

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, they will produce more

food

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products having high quality and meet the demands of residents. For what have been discussed above, I may draw the conclusion that

although

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foreign

food

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is very

popular recent years,

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popular in recent years,

people should pay more attention

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local

food

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not only due to its quality but

also

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to promote the development of domestic economy.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

290 words

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novelty
diversity
perception
premium
globalization
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economic factors
subsidies
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eco-conscious
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Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

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