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DESCRIBE A PLACE YOU WOULD GO FOR A PERFECT HOLIDAY

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The destination for my dream of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 in Tibet. Located in China, it is one of the autonomous administrative divisions of China. Tibet is a place having wild nature and a unique and mysterious
culture
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 compared to other popular travel destinations. The
first
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 attraction of Tibet is a specific nature due to located of the largest and highest elevation region on the earth. The weather is changeable during a year in Tibet, so people can experience various types of Tibetan weather. If people want to avoid polluted cities and noisy vehicles, Tibet will be the right decision because the environment is fresh and pure.
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, it is probably a wonderful place to relax and relieve life stresses. The
second
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 reason is that Tibet is known for the mysterious and unique
culture
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 associated with Buddhism, being the main religion. Because of the harsh climate, Tibet
is
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was
 almost an isolated region to keep the
culture
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 values intact as several centuries ago. The most unique aspect of its
culture
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 is indeed the combination of politics and the religion which
have never seen
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has never seen
 in other countries in the world. With the majority of the population following Buddhism, Tibetan people still
believes
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believe
 strongly in faith.
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, it influences all aspects of daily life of the residents. All these beautiful things make Tibet one of the most attractive places and a dream destination for any
travelers
a person who changes location
traveller
.
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, Tibet could be my dream destination.
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