The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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Over the
last
ten years,
western
a film about life in the western United States during the period of exploration and development
Western
societies have seen close to a 20% rise in the number of children who are overweight.
This
essay will discuss some reasons why
this
has occurred and examine the consequences of
this
worrying trend. The main cause of
this
problem is poor diet. Over the
last
decade there
Accept comma addition
decade, there
has been a prolific increase in the number of fast
food
restaurants.
For example
, on nearly every high street there is a MacDonald’s, Kentucky Fried Chicken and Pizza Hut. The
food
in these places has been proven to be very unhealthy, and much of the advertising is targeted at children,
thus
ensuring that they constitute the bulk of the customers of these establishments.
However
, it is not only due to eating out, but
also
the type of diet many children have at home. A lot of
food
consumed is processed
food
, especially with regards to ready-made meals which are a quick and easy option for parents who are working hard. The effects of
this
have been and will continue to be very serious.
Firstly
, there has been a large increase in health related diseases amongst children, especially diabetes.
This
debilitating illness means a child has to be injected with insulin for the rest of their life. Not only
this
, very overweight children often experience bullying from other children, which may affect their mental health. The negative stigma of being overweight may
also
affect self-esteem. To sum up, it is evident that there are several causes of obesity amongst children, and a variety of negative effects. Society must ensure steps are taken to prevent
this
problem from deteriorating
further
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overweight
  • obesity
  • caloric intake
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • screen time
  • physical education
  • nutritious
  • psychological well-being
  • self-esteem
  • socioeconomic
  • healthcare system
  • life expectancy
  • obesity-related complications
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