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Thanks to the development of technology, many employers are now offering employees the option to work from home. Is this a negative or positive development?

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In the recent times, technology has evolved drastically.
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, there is a proliferation of communication tools like email, messages and project management software systems, an increasing number of businesses are allowing their
staff
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 to
work
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 from
home
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. In my view,
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 is a positive step for both companies and employees.
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 from
home
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 option enables the workers to have the flexibility of
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.
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, he can choose to
work
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 at his convenient
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.
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, he would be saving on the commuting expenses too.
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 results in a productive
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 for the employers as the employee
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do not have
 to stress on the timings and transportation. Along with
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, employees can spend
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 with their families
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 of staying away from them for longer hours.
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freedom not
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freedom, not
 only improves the quality of their
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, but of their life as well.
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 to that, the companies are
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 benefitted with
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 option of working from
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. There would be less maintenance charges on the infrastructure and other facilities like electricity bills,
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 expenses and office maintenance.
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, they can have an advantage of hiring the employees globally.
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, they would be loaded with
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a number
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 of eligible roles to choose the resources
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of
 any part of the world at the
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 of recruiting the open positions. In conclusion,
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 every job cannot be done from
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, if it is possible, it can be beneficial. Both companies and
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 can reap the rewards in terms of productivity and quality
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, while workers are able to manage their
time
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 better.

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