The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

#show #percentages #meals #three #nutrients

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

This

pie chart illustrates the

reat

Correct your spelling

rate

great

in typical meals of

sodium

, saturated and added sugar in

break fast

Correct your spelling

breakfast

show examples

dinner

, lunch and

snacks

. In general, the most

excting

Correct your spelling

exciting

feature is

that

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

the most

sodium

in the

dinner

. The sodiumindinnermorethan saturated

whereas

the

satutated

Correct your spelling

saturated

fat in breakfast

Add a missing verb

is more

show examples

than

sodium

However

Both the saturated fat and added

suger

Correct your spelling

sugar

have

same

Change the article

the same

show examples

average

Change preposition

for

show examples

breakfast in the

snacks

suger

Correct your spelling

sugar

is increasing but

Change preposition

show examples

dinner

Correct your spelling

show examples

drop

Wrong verb form

dropping

show examples

On the other hand

, the

dinner

and shacks have the same percentages. We note the

dinner

have

Correct subject-verb agreement

has

show examples

43% of

sodium

, 37% of saturated fat and 23% added

suger

Correct your spelling

sugar

. the

sodum

Correct your spelling

sodium

has the most

ration

Correct your spelling

ratio

show examples

Change preposition

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

breakfast

Add a comma

,breakfast

show examples

the

sodium

falls but in

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

lunch

Correct your spelling

show examples

rising

Wrong verb form

rises

show examples

. the

snacks

has

Change the verb form

have

show examples

42% added

suger

Correct your spelling

sugar

but in

break fast

Correct your spelling

breakfast

show examples

less than

snacks

To sum up

, the pie chart has

show

Wrong verb form

shown

show examples

aquite

Correct your spelling

quite

a quite

significant difference in meals among various

Averge

Correct your spelling

Average

sudiom

Correct your spelling

sodium

studio

studios

addod

Correct your spelling

added

sugar and

saturanted

Correct your spelling

saturated

fat.

Submitted by qatabimohammed2000 on Fri May 29 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

▼

Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, dinner, snacks, suger with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

▼

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
32
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

154 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

Nutrients
Unhealthy
Daily intake
Percentage
Carbohydrates
Fats
Proteins
Meals
Balanced diet
Consumption
Excess
Health implications
Obesity
Diabetes
Heart disease
Convenience foods
Fast foods
Socioeconomic factors
Lifestyle choices
Healthy eating habits
Dietary recommendations

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4.5
band
Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent era, the Government have spent a lot of money to improve the railways, buses, and new metro services within the cities. Even, there are also available huge government grants to develop the local art galleries like cinemas and museums. It is completely agreed to give more priority to the public services over the development art locations. This essay will cover the necessity to improve the local transportation system for the people to travel in the city as well as the Art development Grants that must be distributed to the public transportation development by the government in coming years which will prove this.
4
band
In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?
In some parts of the world, the fact that young people are reluctant to vote in an election is still becoming an issue. I believe, there are many reasons that might lead to this problem, but the solutions has to be hand over to the government and the individuals in each countries.
7.5
band
Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. discuss both these views and give your own opinion
As the world becomes increasingly interconnected, working overseas comes into the topic of debate hence, there are differing views about professionals embarking on careers abroad rather than their home country. In the following essay, we will explore both perspectives, and I will share my personal viewpoint.
<4
band
Think about someone who has encouraged you in life. How have they encouraged you? Give specific examples.
Think about someone who has encouraged you in life. How have they encouraged you? Give specific examples.
6
band
Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
People’s opinions differ as to whether or not school children should be given homework. While there are some strong arguments against the setting of homework, I still believe that it is a necessary aspect of education.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Think about someone who has encouraged you in life. How have they encouraged you? Give specific examples.

Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.