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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with?

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Actually, the topic of having a pet specifically children is constantly debated. I consider having a pet for children is a really good idea.
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 is basically because is a good strategy which has many
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mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature
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 benefits and for not having accidents we have to learn how to teach children to interact in a good way with pets. Particularly, children do not have exotic pets
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 as spiders or
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snakes, which
 are most likely to generate a
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 to have accidents with them. According to a recent study by Harvard University in
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 safety, children often have domestic animals
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 as dogs, cats, fishes and even birds, which normally do not have any type of risk at all. Taking these results into account, statistically accidents with pets are really weird and from my
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 that pets do not present physical danger to children. Pets can have a benefit in
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 psychology.
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 their young
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age, they
 begin to develop a certain sympathy and responsibility,
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: take care of them, feed them, clean them, etc. A statistical study from the University of Norway stated that children who grow up with pets tend to solve their personal conflicts in a better way than the rest, so
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 a pet can improve a
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's mental health. In conclusion, there is strong support for studies that affirm that children who have pets generate something positive in them and
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 is likely to influence their future.
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