Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as math and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?
It is argued that due to being difficult curriculum subjects
such
as math
and philosophy
, these subjects should be select optional instead
of compulsory by students. This
essay agrees that several subjects which have no children’s interest should be optional, providing that there should not include main subjects.
On the one hand, there could be several beneficial factors being optional subjects for the students, however
, the main merit is that more and more children can adopt deep knowledge
if they choose their favourite lessons. It is clear that because students can read more enthusiastically their materials, they can discriminate exactly between wrong and right information which influence to gain in-depth knowledge
. As a result
, this
situation makes a possible to get a high grade from an exam or to increase their study skills. For instance
, in the last
semester there were some compulsory subjects such
as microeconomics, which did not give me an essential knowledge
, however
Accept comma addition
however, this
this
year due to being optional my subjects, I can assimilate knowledge
perfectly.
On the other hand
, although
there are some vital advantages, but it does not mean that all of the subjects should be optional, especially the main subjects. It means that the majority of children have to learn some essential lessons such
as math
and philosophy
because such
lessons can give contribution significantly to students’ thinking skills. Moreover
, with the help of math
or philosophy
many can think logically and quickly. For example
, according to researchers’ study in the USA the children who know very well as math
andmath
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and math
philosophy
can perform better qualifications compared with others who have lowest knowledge
about both math
and philosophy
.
In conclusion, while optional subjects create more chances to assimilate knowledge
, however
, there have not included the main subjects. I think that such
math
and philosophy
subjects should not be optional in the schools or universities.Submitted by ev093563 on
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