Unemployment is one of the biggest problems of contemporary society. What do you think are the main causes of unemployment? What solutions can you suggest?

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It

is argued by many people that unemployment is the biggest issue of many developing countries which make the

economic

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economy

went down quickly in the developed countries.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

this

essay will illustrate some reasons and

sollution

a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution

solution

solutions

to deal with

this

issue.

firstly

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Firstly

, the main cause of unemployment is the people don't have a well qualified, they lack of experiences about their

job

or they don't have

satisfaction

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the satisfaction

in their

job

, they just seek for a high salary

job

so they feel

boring

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bored

just after a few

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months

.

futher

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Further

Futher

more, they did not have knowledge about their

job

, they just access to earn

living

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a living

.

for

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For

example, designer required a rich creative to find

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more interesting ideas

a more interesting idea

to design new products,

however

, the employment who just have a knowledge about

design but

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design, but

dont

do not

don't

know how to find the idea or where to find the

informations

a message received and understood

information

.

that

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That

is easy to make them to be retired.

moreover

in addition

Moreover

,

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,

in the competitive

job

market, the people, especially the graduated student who want to land a

job

at a big firm with high

salary but

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salary, but

they don't have experiences have to face with many difficult which make them give up very quickly.

secondly

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Secondly

, to deal with

this

problem the employments have to improve

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themselves

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on

both

side

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sides

, the qualifications and skill.

for

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For

example, the senior student

have

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has

to master in vital soft skills which is basic in office work that will help them get some mark in the boss's eye.

beside

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Beside

that they

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that, they

also

gain some experiences through doing various jobs without commitment to get use to with being overburdened with work.

that

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That

will support their work more effective.

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In

n conclusion, the increasing of

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the unemployment rate

unemployment rate

employment rate

e is the largest issue in the modern community due to the lack of qualification of employment, so they

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will need

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the best

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job

in the future