The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may as many as 29 million vehicle on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduce to control car ownership and use. To what extant do you agree or disagree?

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Undoubtedly that cars are an easy and comfortable means for transportations

Accept space

however

, they has many problems and governments seek to find solutions for them.

First

and foremost, cars make transportation

more easy

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easier

they

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They

provide

alot

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a lot

of time for people when they want to

achive

to gain with effort

achieve

any task. They manage them to move without and

difficults

an effort that is inconvenient

difficulties

difficult

Cars

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Car

manufacturing companies compete daily to enhance their products. In other word, they do their best and researches to be more safe, decent, beautiful, high security and more comfortable. All these boost attraction consumer. On the other word, Many problems are caused by increasing numbers of cars around the world.

Firstly

, Traffic Jam is

one

of the most problems that face all countries exert great efforts to solve

this

problem.

secondly

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Secondly

, The

cars fumes

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cars, fumes

one

of the main reasons that cause global warming and some companies start to produce electric cars

such

as TESLA.

Thirdly

, Accidents are

one

of the major

reason

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reasons

that result in death around the

world but

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world, but

cars become better in recent years than in the past. There are many problems that caused by

increasing number

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the increasing number

an increasing number

of cars. I think that

the easy

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the easiest

solution is reduction special cars or

increase

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increases

fossil fuel prices for special cars or take taxes on these cars. Another

one

is ban

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bans

the use of special cars

inside

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cities. From above discussion, It is undeniable fact that increasing

nmbers

an illegal daily lottery

numbers

number

of cars are the source of many

problem but

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problems, but

problems but

they make transportation more faster than in past decades.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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