The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may as many as 29 million vehicle on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduce to control car ownership and use. To what extant do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly that cars are an easy and comfortable means for transportations
,
Accept space
,
however
, they has many problems and governments seek to find solutions for them.
First
and foremost, cars make transportation
more easy
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easier
.
they
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They
provide
alot
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a lot
of time for people when they want to
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
any task. They manage them to move without and
difficults
an effort that is inconvenient
difficulties
difficult
.
Cars
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Car
manufacturing companies compete daily to enhance their products. In other word, they do their best and researches to be more safe, decent, beautiful, high security and more comfortable. All these boost attraction consumer. On the other word, Many problems are caused by increasing numbers of cars around the world.
Firstly
, Traffic Jam is
one
of the most problems that face all countries exert great efforts to solve
this
problem.
secondly
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Secondly
, The
cars fumes
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cars, fumes
one
of the main reasons that cause global warming and some companies start to produce electric cars
such
as TESLA.
Thirdly
, Accidents are
one
of the major
reason
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reasons
that result in death around the
world but
Accept comma addition
world, but
cars become better in recent years than in the past. There are many problems that caused by
increasing number
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the increasing number
an increasing number
of cars. I think that
the easy
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the easiest
solution is reduction special cars or
increase
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increases
fossil fuel prices for special cars or take taxes on these cars. Another
one
is ban
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bans
the use of special cars
inside
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in
cities. From above discussion, It is undeniable fact that increasing
nmbers
an illegal daily lottery
numbers
number
of cars are the source of many
problem but
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problems, but
problems but
they make transportation more faster than in past decades.
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