The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may as many as 29 million vehicle on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduce to control car ownership and use. To what extant do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly that cars are an easy and comfortable means for transportations

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, they has many problems and governments seek to find solutions for them.

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and foremost, cars make transportation

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easier

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They

provide

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a lot

of time for people when they want to

achive

to gain with effort

achieve

any task. They manage them to move without and

difficults

an effort that is inconvenient

difficulties

difficult

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Car

manufacturing companies compete daily to enhance their products. In other word, they do their best and researches to be more safe, decent, beautiful, high security and more comfortable. All these boost attraction consumer. On the other word, Many problems are caused by increasing numbers of cars around the world.

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, Traffic Jam is

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of the most problems that face all countries exert great efforts to solve

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problem.

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Secondly

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cars fumes

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cars, fumes

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of the main reasons that cause global warming and some companies start to produce electric cars

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as TESLA.

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, Accidents are

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of the major

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reasons

that result in death around the

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world, but

cars become better in recent years than in the past. There are many problems that caused by

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the increasing number

an increasing number

of cars. I think that

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the easiest

solution is reduction special cars or

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increases

fossil fuel prices for special cars or take taxes on these cars. Another

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is ban

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bans

the use of special cars

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in

cities. From above discussion, It is undeniable fact that increasing

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numbers

number

of cars are the source of many

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problems, but

problems but

they make transportation more faster than in past decades.