In 10 years the world will change dramatically.Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the
world
is changing at an alarming rate. Various inventions are being created day by day. So, what will happen in 2030 years? Try to imagine the
world
in 10
years
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year
period. My
world
in 2030. It is a complicated issue to consider. Tremendous changes we will face up to and how these changes will affect us. Now I try to write my imaginations and I will support my opinion with examples.
Firstly
, we need to think about what aspects our talk should include. In my mind, there are several issues, which are more hot topics as environmental, educational, well-being of society,
health
care, work market as well. A good deal of
above
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the above
mentioned should take into account in a wake of
pandemic situation
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the pandemic situation
a pandemic situation
covered the
world
where we live caused by COVID 19 may lead disastrous conclusions as work market is shrinking, great demand of people can lose their workplace
as a result
. In many societies these days, people are concerned about environmental problems. We all know that humanity always harms mother nature. These include dumping of waste in public places, deforestation, the launch of satellites and many toxins emitted by
enterprises
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the enterprises
and vehicles. But, we have questions, if so what will be state of the environment in 2030? Or we can preserve our universe by preventing
this
, and we protect it? Opinions on the issue are divided, and my own considered thought is that in ten years,
today
's problems will be resolved and many changes will occur in nature and society. If humanity treats the Earth well, the depletion of the ozone layer, one of the global problems, will be ceased and even be restored.
Moreover
,
problem
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the problem
of the waste products that causes environmental pollution will be solved in all countries, if facilities, which is special reproduced garbage-can, are installed densely populated areas,
such
as on roads and state and medical institutions.
Therefore
, it can be said that if we take care of nature, it will
also
protect us, and in 2030 we live in the pure air and beautiful environment. Another significant aspect is educational matter. On a more personal level, I would say education will be still more improved and changed in a 10-years. It is generally viewed that the educational system is improving the year. As far as I can see attention to the field of education increase,
as a result
,
activities
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the activities
of many educational institutions will have been organized. The knowledge level of young people will be enhanced based on excellent teaching methods, new techniques.
To
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In
my mind, all technologies will develop on the basis on the top of modern knowledge.
In particular
, all modern and
multistoried
buildings, enterprises will be built, much equipment will be created that can meet the needs of people. If we, young people, gain deep knowledge and put them into practice, Uzbekistan will achieve not only in the educational system, but
also
in multitude of branches. Another the important field is medicine. We can say beyond any doubt that in every country in the
world
, people's
health
is more important. Due to
today
's pandemic, we know the level of medicine, and it became clear that we needed the subsequent development of the medical field. I am sure that
this
pandemic will
also
be eradicated. After the COVID19, people's lives begin to change for the better.
That is
, they begin value
life
, to give each other more love. Feelings of mutual affection, love, fidelity, respect, trust between people can be
further
enhanced.
Instead
of wars, they can create a lot of news, understanding why they live on earth. It Is generally believed that if we draw the right conclusions
today
and take into account the
health
of ourselves, our loved families, relations and people,
then
by 2030 all the necessary conditions for medicine can be created. The
later
referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
, if I write about my
life
, I hope to have a
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
profession and a happy family. My parents, relatives, and friends will surround me. If I try, I will achieve my goals, and I will be among the people who have a place in society. What I mean by
that
is basically
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is, basically
, all the things I will manifest in my experience of
life
. All of my thoughts, feelings, actions, and experiences shape my
world
. The logical conclusion would be nothing, which can remain in one place forever. Everything will change, will be updated and improved. Tomorrow is better than
today
. In 2030, many changes will occur in the
world
and my
life
. I always ask Allah that by 2030 we will have all achieved
health
.
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