Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree

some

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Some

people are of an opinion that, individuals who are steadily focused

in

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on

their work life will have a

gratifyingly

productive career compared to the ones who keep switching their jobs.To some extent I agree with the statement

,

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,

as

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe, perseverance is the key to success.

no

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No

doubt

,

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,

everybody wants a prosperous

career but

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career, but

very few are able to achieve it

,

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,

those who made the right professional choices that made their work pleasurable.

persistence

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Persistence

results in

favorable

encouraging or approving or pleasing

favourable

outcomes,

for

example if

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example, if

a person

is working

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has been working

as a teacher for a long time they not only gain experience but are

also

promoted to a higher post where they are given more authority along with responsibilities based on their accomplishments.

frequent

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Frequent

alteration of jobs is

accceptable

worthy of acceptance or satisfactory

acceptable

in some cases where

their

in or at that place

there

is a mismatch between

employee's

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employees'

supply and company's demand or if one feels their potential is not fully utilised.

but

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But

in doing so, one should be responsible enough to know when to stop

otherwise

they will

endup

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end up

with regret.

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For

instance

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,

if a person keeps changing jobs he will have no proper experience that

willl

the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention

will

be considered acceptable and by the time he gets familiar with one job

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,

he is already looking for another.

yes

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Yes

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

agree that

holiding

the act of retaining something

holding

firmly a work position can be much more rewarding in the long term compared to the ones, who keep exploring vacancies for temporary jobs.

it

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It

might be look

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might look

might be looked

exciting and

adventurous but

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adventurous, but

not beneficial in the long run.