Today , worldly corona virus widespread become every nation problem including education sector and it make many educational officers and experts suggest to spent more budget for free internet access .To what extend do you agree or disagree?
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fastly
with rapid movements
quickly
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involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
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including educational field so many people recommend that more Linking Words
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this
opinion.
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many schools are closed for more than six months to prevent the Accept space
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spread
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virus
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the virus
a virus
hence
school syllabus Linking Words
can not
be completedcan not
cannot
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long gap may delay a student"s important time to acquire knowledge so to tackle Linking Words
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might depend on online coachingSuggestion
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pupil
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to allocate capable of being justified
justifiable
money
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budget
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the budget
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depends
educated
citizensSuggestion
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regular academic year
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the regular academic year
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chek
up only examine so as to determine accuracy, quality, or condition
check
student's
and teacher's are able to enter Suggestion
the student's
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into
maintane
safe keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintain
mention
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or not do proper hand the property created by the space between two objects or points
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distances
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the work of cleansing (usually with soap and water)
washing
ther
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there
spread
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Corona
diseaseSuggestion
Coronary
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allocating online class with in home Accept space
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premices
is an effective measure and that will help to ensure Suggestion
education
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class room
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classroom
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money
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right to get free of them or themselves
their
education
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feeling
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education
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educate
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online coaching
is helpful to maintain the spirit of Suggestion
an online coaching
education
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due to the tremendous advantages of online Accept space
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education
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access
education
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way to protect right for free Accept space
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I agree with the view to allocate more Accept space
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money
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