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Some people think women should be given equal chance to work and excel in their careers. Other believe that a woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.

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Women’s freedom and rights have always been in the heat of debate throughout the generations. Though some people argue that women should be allowed to pursue their career of interest, the majority of people are against
this
 and say that women are meant to take care of their family.
This
 essay will discuss on the opinion why women should be given equal opportunity in the society.
To begin
 with, these days we can see women in all sectors of industry. Though the percentage is less, women have made their career in various men dominated sectors like astronomy, politics and armed forces. A study says that women are more inclined to adhere to the standards and policies of the tasks assigned to them, which in turn help them to progress in their work.
Thus
, we can say that women are
also
 efficient as men in these sectors.
Moreover
, working women
also
 gain to invest more in their children’s education and self-development.
This
 is because of the additional income which helps parents to send their children to extra-curricular classes and private schools. A recent survey in India, has shown that both working parents contribute almost fifty percent of their income towards the children’s education and
also
 the children’s of working mothers are found to become self-independent early when compared to other children.F from
this
 it is clear that women facilitate good parenting. These essays discussed on women are equally as efficient as men and those who have jobs are
also
 good parents in enabling the self-development of their children.
Hence
, in my opinion, women should be given an equal opportunity at work and gender inequality should be discouraged.
Submitted by Youssef Ashraf on

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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