Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

English is the most crucial language that should be learnt because it is an international language.
However
, it cannot out weight local languages. In my opinion, I believe that everyone should understand
English especially
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English, especially
kids and
also
preserve local languages. On the one hand, learning English at school can guarantee the advantages for students.
Firstly
,
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will learn
learning
learned
learnt
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is learning
basic English from the start can help students
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to
further
study in the long term.
For example
, in English, the most important factors to master it is vocabulary and grammar. It could make many bad habits or hardly
change errors
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change, errors
when they start to learn English in the middle age.
Secondly
, English can create working opportunities. It is clear that local companies can hardly compete with international companies,
moreover
people are likely to get
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higher
paid and more experiences from the foreign countries than the others.
On the other hand
, local languages have some benefits that English is not able to replace.
First
of all, there are plenty ways to become successful and learning English is not the only way.
For instance
, having a high quality of education background can provide people any careers.
Moreover
, protect local languages can help younger generation in understanding historical events and local cultures.
For example
, in Vietnam, there are hundreds of wars and cultures that can only explain by
Vietnamese
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the Vietnamese
.
Therefore
, with
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the other foreign language explanation
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other foreign language explanations
, the meanings can be different. In conclusion,
although
learning English
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provides
working opportunities and other benefits, local languages still need to preserve due to its advantages. I believe that
instead
of
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eliminating
one of them, people should improve both
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kinds
of languages particularly.
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  • linguistic heritage
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  • language revitalization
  • language policy
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