In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
As the technology and engineering keep advancing new-
puspose
and bigger structures emerge. One of them Suggestion
being
shopping Suggestion
is
centers
which attract more and more shoppers which in turn leads to lots of convenience stores running out of an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
centre
bussiness
. a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
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the convenience
price
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Firstly
, with big malls and shopping centres gaining more popularity consumers have become able to shop for numerous types of things Linking Words
at
one location. Being able to acquire all the required items from a single point saves a lot of travel time and energy. Suggestion
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For example
, several years ago when I moved into a new apartment, I needed to purchase several pieces of furniture along with some electrical equipment for kitchen Linking Words
such
as microwave and blender. I went to a mall with Linking Words
wide variety
of shops and Suggestion
a wide variety
choices both
for furniture and gadgets, Accept comma addition
choices, both
thus
I was able to buy everything I needed and left satisfied with my purchases as I had a chance to visit numerous shops before buying something. Linking Words
However
, if the shopping centre was not there I would have to stop by multiple places located significantly apart from each other.
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Additionally
, because different brands/Linking Words
companiesproviding
the same type of services are all situated in close proximity to each other, a Suggestion
companies providing
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price
competition takes place pushing the monetary values of products down. Reduction of costs positively affects the financial situation of the customers. something given for victory or superiority in a contest or competition or for winning a lottery
prize
For instance
, two fast food restaurants that are located Linking Words
next
to each other on the same floor of the mall will have to compete for customers Linking Words
thus
plummeting the food prices. Linking Words
This
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also
the result of cheaper product transportation costs as there are a lot of shops, restaurants and alike getting their goods delivered to the same location Linking Words
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the
mall, Suggestion
The
thus
reducing the transfer value and final Linking Words
price
of the merchandise.
In summary, consumers give Use synonyms
privilage
to big shopping centres over a special advantage or immunity or benefit not enjoyed by all
privileges
privilege
the small
Suggestion
smaller
convinience
shops when going for shopping which results in termination of the business activities for small stores. the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
conveniences
Although
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this
can be interpreted as an adverse progress by some, Linking Words
this
development actually brings lots of benefits for Linking Words
customers including
but not limited to all-in-one location for shopping and lower Accept comma addition
customers, including
price
tags.Use synonyms
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