In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from additional income, other feel they lack support because of their parents' absence

Working within

family

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the family

began to be a very serious issue over the

last

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few decades. Certain people consider the

variant

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variety

variability

variation

of

both

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mother and father doing their jobs,

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however others

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however, others

strongly oppose to

this

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view, expressing that their posterity will likely suffer in

this

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case.

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essay will elucidate the reasons for which humans have their diverse opinions on that account. On the one hand, it may sound acceptable for

both

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parents to work, provided that their total income is not sufficiently high to maintain normal

lifegoing

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life going

into details, in some situations it is just paramount to provide their children, so they can feel themselves pleasant and happy.

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, parents are surviving in the very old flat with no any opportunity to provide their

child

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children

with food, clothes or even games, here it is absolutely obligatory to aid each other, contributing own part to child's life. Briefly, the proposition of

both

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parents working together should be applied in very difficult financial conditions, where there is no any possibility to cope with it by

single parent

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a single parent

, no matter be it father or mother.

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, the

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statement looks entirely correct, as there must always be someone who will stay with the children: learn and bringing them up appropriately. If

both

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parents do

ther

of them or themselves

their

there

other

jobs, without paying attention how their son or

daugher

a female human offspring

daughter

are maturing

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is maturing

, it will feasibly lead to

worst

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worse

consequencies

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

consequences

consequence

. Namely, he will likely to become entirely with problems and with bad personal

caracteristics

a prominent attribute or aspect of something

characteristics

characteristic

, since nobody took care of him normally. To sum up, it is true that children will not feel any help and love from

parantel side

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the parental side

parental side

. Drawing a conclusion,

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essay explained low family wages and bad childhood as the main

arguementsrst

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and

second

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statements.