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Many people believe that family has greater influence in child life and development as compared to other factors such as friends, tv, music and so on? Do you agree or disagree with the content ?

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It is argued that family has a significantly higher effect
in
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on
childs
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child
children
child's
children's
 development and life as compared to friends, television, amongst other factors. I believe that
family
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the family
 has an irreplaceable role in an
infants
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infant's
 life and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will outline the reasons below.
Firstly
 we must remember that family, regardless if it is
adoptive
having a capacity for adaptation
adaptive
 or biologic, works as the main foundation of every child, as it gives life lasting values
such
 as respect, caring, and learning to live in
community
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the community
,
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
 are vital for the development of every person in society.
Also
, an important point to consider is that To conclude, even friends and other factors may be complementary things that are good for a child development, the nature of a family bond cannot be compared as it is a more.
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