A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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One of the highly controversial issues today relates to
killing
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the killing
of animals for human needs
such
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as
food
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and research
,
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,
or it should not be exploited and they should have similar rights as humans do.
This
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essay will discuss both the views and agree that animals should
killed
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kill
for meeting human needs and
mainating
keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintain
ecobalance
a state of being essentially equal or equivalent; equally balanced
equivalence
. On one hand, some people believe that if humans are most intelligent creature of the world and for their survival it is acceptable to experiment on animal for medicine and
food
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.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
, killing of animals can
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help maintain ecosystem balance.
For instance
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, if everyone depends on vegetation and no animals are
killed
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killed, then
then
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it may lead to increase of animals on the planet that can be harmful.
On the other hand
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, others argue that they are
also
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creature
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created
just like us and should have similar rights like mankind. They
also
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have feelings like loss of loved ones and suffer pain when experimented on. Even though they do
suffer but
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suffer, but
we need to test
new medicine
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new medicines
a new medicine
on
living creature
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a living creature
living creatures
before it is used by humans to check the outcome and we cannot afford to experiment
direct
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directly
on humans.
Also
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, only vegetation cannot suffice to meet the demand of
food
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supply on the planet.
For
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example if
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example, if
we do not use animals for
resarch we
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research, we
research we
have to risk human life and not every part of
world
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the world
grows enough
food
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to meet our needs. In conclusion,
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
we do not have any alternative to meet our needs and develop medical science without using animals, In my opinion animals should be killed to help
reasearch
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
and to
mainatin
keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintain
equilibrium in nature by killing them for
food
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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