Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximize chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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There are many cases where
un
iversity h
aSuggestion
the university
ve been raising t
heir Suggestion
has been raising
tuition
fees and jobs are not guarantee a
fter Suggestion
guaranteed
graduation
. Therefore
, people suggest the removal of arts subjects such
as philosophy
and history
and focus on practical primary courses. I disagree with the statement due to the arts subjects beneficial.
The rise of university
fees and inadequate people that are not employed have nothing to do with arts subject. Firstly
, the meaning behind the increase
of university
fees is because of the importation of facilities. Universities have to upgrade class rooms,
canteens, technologies and so on annually. a room in a school where lessons take place
classrooms
Hence
, it is reasonable to keep raising the tuition
fees for university
’s development. Secondly
, it is obvious that hard time will be paid off. For example
, a person that always keep h
is nose on academic knowledge will be employed undoubtedly.
Suggestion
always keeps
However
, arts subjects such
as history
and philosophy
have great c
eSuggestion
greater
rtain o
f benefits for students. Suggestion
certainty
First
of all, subjects like philosophy
and history
are bedrock to help student
to take in primary courses more efficiency. For instance
, the primary course for engineer s
tudents are extremely heavy. Suggestion
engineering
However
, with the additional of arts subjects, these students will be able to balance their studies. Moreover
, it could also
teach student
about people and how countries system operates. As a result
, student
can easily adapt to the society and community.
To conclude, although
the increase
in university
fees as well as fear for b
eing unemployed after Suggestion
of
graduation
is essential, I believe that people should not remove arts subjects due to their benefits.
There are many cases where un
iversity h
aSuggestion
the university
ve been raising t
heir Suggestion
has been raising
tuition
fees and jobs are not guarantee a
fter Suggestion
guaranteed
graduation
. Therefore
, people suggest the removal of arts subjects such
as philosophy
and history
and focus on practical primary courses. I disagree with the statement due to the arts subjects beneficial.
The rise of university
fees and inadequate people that are not employed have nothing to do with arts subject. Firstly
, the meaning behind the increase
of university
fees is because of the importation of facilities. Universities have to upgrade class rooms,
canteens, technologies and so on annually. a room in a school where lessons take place
classrooms
Hence
, it is reasonable to keep raising the tuition
fees for university
’s development. Secondly
, it is obvious that hard time will be paid off. For example
, a person that always keep h
is nose on academic knowledge will be employed undoubtedly.
Suggestion
always keeps
However
, arts subjects such
as history
and philosophy
have great c
eSuggestion
greater
rtain o
f benefits for students. Suggestion
certainty
First
of all, subjects like philosophy
and history
are bedrock to help student
to take in primary courses more efficiency. For instance
, the primary course for engineer s
tudents are extremely heavy. Suggestion
engineering
However
, with the additional of arts subjects, these students will be able to balance their studies. Moreover
, it could also
teach student
about people and how countries system operates. As a result
, student
can easily adapt to the society and community.
To conclude, although
the increase
in university
fees as well as fear for b
eing unemployed after Suggestion
of
graduation
is essential, I believe that people should not remove arts subjects due to their benefits.Submitted by Monkeyboy Nguyễn on
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