Globalisation has both advantages and disadvantages. Discuss both and give your opinion

The
world
is fast becoming interconnected, so as much that people of different races interact freely.
This
global
interactions
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interaction
have
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has
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
merits and demerit. In my opinion, I think the merits outweigh the demerits. The spate of terrorism has been on the rise in recent times.
Different terrorist organization
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The different terrorist organization
now have
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now has
easy access to other groups in different continents.
This
is
as a result
of easy interactions between these groups.
For instance
, the rate of insurgency has increased in West Africa because of the easy link
with
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to
the ISIS group in Iraq and Syria.
This
is a big threat to the existing peace enjoyed in the region.
However
, despite
this
threat, global mingling has more benefits than can be imagined. There is a global collaborative
efforts
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effort
between nations of the
world
to combat deadly disease. The
world
health organisation is borne out of
such
initiative and it has helped in preventing many diseases.
For example
, the
world
’s most deadly disease, smallpox, was eradicated through global interventions.
In addition
, the
world
is almost at the point of eradicating poliomyelitis, a disease condition which has caused a lot of childhood morbidities. I’m conclusion, free association between nations has its positives and negatives. It has promoted civil unrest in most regions of the
world
.
However
, its benefits include providing a
more healthy
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healthier
environment and I strongly believe that it has brought more good than evil
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