In most successful companies, some people think that communication between employers and workers is the most important factor. Other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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left a large proportion of people jobless, many individuals end up engaging in criminal act so as to meet up with their daily requirements. A research carried out by the Nigerian prisons authority showed that, 80% of the inmates sites lack of finance as their major reason for committing crime.
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On the other hand
, another school of thought recommend
that illegal acts are borne out of an individual’s genetic make-up. Suggestion
recommends
In other words
, since the a child’s genetic structure is a combination of traits from both parents, if any of the parents partakes in such
illegitimate act there is about 99.9% possibility that their offspring will exhibit such
attributes because, it is already, embedded in congenital traits. For instance
, investigation into the life of Dereck Brew, a famous serial killer in New Zealand revealed that his father during his youthful age killed three of his ex-girlfriends, hence
his ability to carry out such
acts with feeling any iota of regret.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I believe that a people's
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person's
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the poor financial state
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violation of the law.Suggestion
person's
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