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The chart above, illustrates four factors regarding the standards of life in different countries (Bangladesh, Bolivia, Egypt, Indonesia, USA).

The chart above, illustrates four factors regarding the standards of life in different countries (Bangladesh, Bolivia, Egypt, Indonesia, USA).
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Overall
,
USA
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 is ahead in the first three sections, by a significant amount,
while
Bangladesh
 has the lowest trend in the same sectors. As for
infant
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 mortality rate,
Bangladesh
 has the largest amount,
whereas
USA
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the
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 least. USA’s gross national product per person, is more than 13 thousand dollars,
in contrast
 to
Bangladesh
that
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 stands
at140
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at 140
 dollars. Bolivia and Indonesia have a similar trend, and Egypt is only 110 dollars above the latter. Americans have the highest calorie consumption per day at 2653 calories,
whereas
Bangladesh
 only
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 over half of that. The remaining countries have an average of 2000 to 3000 calories per day. Life expectancy, is significantly higher in America at 74 years of age,
following
this
 is Egypt at 56 and the rest have 50,49 and 40 respectively (Bolivia, Indonesia,
Bangladesh
).
Lastly
, infant mortality, is impressively high in
Bangladesh
 at 132 per 1000 births,
while
 Bolivia is close by with 124.
Moreover
, Indonesia has a 6.5 times higher trend than
USA’s
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,
that is
 12 in 1000 births.
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