Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion .

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In recent times, some unfortunate events

have undoubtedly threaten

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have undoubtedly threatened

the lives of many

wildlife

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animals. Many people argue that protection of all

wildlife

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creatures

are

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imminent in the wake of natural crisis,

however

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, others contend that only those who are on the verge of extinction should be protected. While supporting the latter view; in

this

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essay we will discuss both sides of the arguments.

To begin

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with, those who

favor

promote over another

favour

the protection of all wild

species

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believe that in the presence of any unprecedented calamity, many of them will be at risk of losing their lives. As there

are

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uncertainity

being unsettled or in doubt or dependent on chance

uncertainty

uncertainties

of climate conditions around the globe, threats to wild animals are inevitable. Recently,

for example

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, fire incidents in

Amazon rainforest

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the Amazon rainforest

has deteriorated

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have deteriorated

lives of many inhabitants of the forest.

Therefore

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, it is evident

for

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many people that all

wildlife

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animals ought to be protected to avoid casualties due to any natural disaster.

Nevertheless

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, there are others who contend that only endangered

species

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should be protected. I hold a strong stance with

this

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perception, it is because, there are wild animals who can go extinct, if

priorties

something owned; any tangible or intangible possession that is owned by someone

properties

are not shifted toward them.

For instance

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, the

species

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of white tigers are only few left, in

such

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circumstances- protecting their

species

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should be utmost crucial.

Hence

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, monitoring those

wildlife

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animals who are

susceptable

(often followed by 'of' or 'to') yielding readily to or capable of

susceptible

of extinction need

priorty

status established in order of importance or urgency

priority

. To sum up,

although

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all animals need to be protected from unexpected situation that may possess

threat

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a threat

to their lives, I believe,

priorty

status established in order of importance or urgency

priority

priorities

should be given to those who are on the verge of extinction.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

259 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
ecosystem
conservation status
ecological significance
holistic approach
endangered species
natural heritage
unforeseen negative impacts
economically non-viable
prioritization
ecosystem balance
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